I Think that the poem is about the sun and how it moves across the sky. I think theese things because...
1.The burning head could be the sun because the sun is a burninf ball and a head is a burining ball.
2. The first line could mean " Low! in the morning Light' and the sun comes up from the horizon.
3. Climbing up the heavinly hill could be the sky because the sun moves upward in an arch.
4. The sun is it's strongest by the time it reaches the top of the arch which is the middle of its day. line 6 could be a metafor for that.
5. He look another way at the end could describe the end of the day when the sun goes away.
The son part at the end im not so shore about but it could be the moon because the moon is not as bright as the sun so it is kind of its son, or it could be an extra line couse he needed to follow the sonnet rules.
Another reason for me to believe that it's the sun is that you said that the poem related to ancient Egypt and the Egyptians worshiped the sun just like William Shakespeare is doing in his sonnet.
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I had the same thought as you did Fabian. I like how you numbered your thinkings and it's easy to understand. If you still didn't search for the meaning go ahead! Wait can we? Greatjob Fabian!
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Fabian,
Great connections, you points really make sense. Bullet number four I had never found out until today in class. You expressed what you thought really clearly. You have some grammar mistakes, but you could always improve on that. I did something familiar on my blog too, make connections and think over what each line could represent. Great to see your thinking but next time a bit of grammar...
At first i didnt have any idea what it meant.. and today i learned alot from different people and found out that this may be about the sun and that its about the cycle of how the sun rises and ..goes down.... so yeah you had alot of good points on how to like support your answer.. NICE
Nice blog Fabian.
Yesterday, I had didn't even think of the thoughts that you had. The points that you had really make sense and after I read it, I agreed and it made me think further. So thanks for that. :)
Now today, we went further and the poem makes more sense and so does your connections to the poem.
The points you had were very carefully thoughts and you had a lot of evidence from the poem.
Good job! :D
I agree with your thoughts because they make sense and that's almost what I was thinking. NICCCEEE!
Fabian, as with others, you have some great thoughts, but they are individual and not connected with one another. Take some time to put them all together into one cohesive thought.
Fabian,
You did a nice job but when you wrote you said at the end I knew you were talking about Mr Mcqueen but others may not. next time write to the world not just to Mr McQueen.
Fabian,You had lots of great connections and thoughts. You really explained your thoughts well and had good evidence. But, like Mitsu said, there were some grammer mistakes but you can always fix it...Great Job!
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